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Sooo I totally got abusive with the attempt at shadowing and coloring... not too bad a turn out, but not excellent either.
I think I'll stick to my black and white comic from here on XD.
Anyways, my audition for
Cam the Teddy Tiger makes an appearance this time! Ref-sheet to come probably after finals are done.
Critique and comment away please~!
I think I'll stick to my black and white comic from here on XD.
Anyways, my audition for
Cam the Teddy Tiger makes an appearance this time! Ref-sheet to come probably after finals are done.
Critique and comment away please~!
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Unexpected and entertaining!
I agree with Dreamwish about pacing. But I encourage having fun with your panels over paying attention to serious things like "pacing." The panels don't all have to be squares. (Although squares are really easy.
) Nice change at the bottom, with the long panel.
It would be nicer to have a bit more scenery, too. Not much, but enough to show exactly where everything is. For example, Crimson Dusk is on a pole here, but the pole is nowhere in sight around the protagonists. If Crimson dusk was standing on a clock-post or lamp-post, and the same post was partially shown around the protagonists, then when Crimson falls off the post near Cam, the audience gets it.
The motion throughout the page is good. Even though the panels are constructed simply, the transition from panel to panel is clear. The only placce I had any sort of trouble is panel 4, where Cam and Teddy's speeches get mixed up. The word bubbles are too close together.
Panel 3 cound have used a little extra art.
Extra points for good composition.
I agree with Dreamwish about pacing. But I encourage having fun with your panels over paying attention to serious things like "pacing." The panels don't all have to be squares. (Although squares are really easy.
) Nice change at the bottom, with the long panel.It would be nicer to have a bit more scenery, too. Not much, but enough to show exactly where everything is. For example, Crimson Dusk is on a pole here, but the pole is nowhere in sight around the protagonists. If Crimson dusk was standing on a clock-post or lamp-post, and the same post was partially shown around the protagonists, then when Crimson falls off the post near Cam, the audience gets it.
The motion throughout the page is good. Even though the panels are constructed simply, the transition from panel to panel is clear. The only placce I had any sort of trouble is panel 4, where Cam and Teddy's speeches get mixed up. The word bubbles are too close together.
Panel 3 cound have used a little extra art.
Extra points for good composition.